<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二五年十月上社課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用平水韻三肴作竹枝詞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集簡(jiǎn)評(píng) ：謝 勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊頭題字 ：謝宗山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇編輯 ：趙以順</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙學(xué)鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">赤竹枝一組 赤河風(fēng)情</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">一</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不釣魚(yú)龍不釣鮫，水波滟滟繞村郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只為村頭小阿妹，釣?zāi)t霞掛眼梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲歲河堤空長(zhǎng)茅，年年心事費(fèi)傳抄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隔簾徒慕雙飛燕，又啄新泥補(bǔ)舊巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甜言數(shù)句暖寒宵，好酒三盅佐綺肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赤水人家多淑女，上得廳堂下得庖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傳過(guò)眉梢傳竹梢，風(fēng)兒來(lái)把信兒捎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">哥哥只覺(jué)心潮動(dòng)，不覺(jué)穿林葉在敲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">五</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">或掛心頭或眼梢，春愁癢癢在含苞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愁來(lái)眼角還能掩，癢在心頭不好撓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">六</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">誰(shuí)將霞色撒山凹？日落峰頭跌一跤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">好似哥哥心不定，點(diǎn)燃別緒過(guò)蓬茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：蛙哥這組竹枝詞，朗朗上口，題雖赤河風(fēng)情，全旨愛(ài)情，想來(lái)蛙哥也正需一場(chǎng)刻骨的戀愛(ài)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">國(guó)慶假日以平水三肴韻擬竹枝（八首）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">一</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四屋清清不寂寥，長(zhǎng)天白日隱書(shū)巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗風(fēng)入醉添慵懶，坐臥閑閑把字敲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鎮(zhèn)日趟平身臥巢，塵間俗事已全拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩(shī)邊小飲人空醉，習(xí)習(xí)山風(fēng)吹酒肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕云浮雨步城郊，野鵲悠閑傍舊巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何人清吹涼入骨，似有梅花落塘坳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑行蒼野把誰(shuí)邀，信步隔云思舊交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">囊底詩(shī)成聊自慰，天風(fēng)陣陣吹蒲茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">五</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小步登臨意興饒，望中疏翠覆山坳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白云入抱清風(fēng)緩，雀引詩(shī)情過(guò)樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">六</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟袖翩翩賦解嘲，秋邊遣興踏洼坳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">揚(yáng)揚(yáng)意氣橫胸出，眼底詩(shī)人盡白茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">七</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">足下津途任凸凹，蟬鳴一路樂(lè)輕敲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">掬來(lái)秋色成詩(shī)語(yǔ)，抖擻風(fēng)姿若島郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">八</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">停停走走漫吟嘲，身外安危或可拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">來(lái)去手機(jī)終在目，夕陽(yáng)隨我把詩(shī)敲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：大兄這組竹枝詞描述假期閉門讀詩(shī)寫詩(shī)，“鎮(zhèn)日趟平身臥巢，塵間俗事已全拋?！眱叭皇窃缱R(shí)浮名身外事，久判閑日醉中消。自得其樂(lè)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周國(guó)慶】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">閑居數(shù)日，以平水三肴韻擬竹枝六首</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">一</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湖光入眼月上梢，倦鳥(niǎo)棲枝夜寂寥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">縱有閑心觀世象，不如小酒佐山肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人宅閑中家似巢，偶爾也逛到東郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東郊水淺山如黛，眾鳥(niǎo)爭(zhēng)鳴戲樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聽(tīng)說(shuō)奧體賽城超，諸多球隊(duì)俱應(yīng)邀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">從今提起足協(xié)事，盡是民間諷與嘲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑來(lái)湖畔把詩(shī)敲，云水依依興味饒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若問(wèn)林泉誰(shuí)愛(ài)我，青山與我是知交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">五</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">魚(yú)入碧潭思化蛟，水晶宮里掛雲(yún)旓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">坊間消息誰(shuí)知了，織網(wǎng)蜘蛛最善啁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小聚農(nóng)莊雅興饒，酒酣打趣話頻拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">解頤人是馮校長(zhǎng)，蔣俠再來(lái)瓶賴茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：國(guó)慶假期并不閑，心隨世象去溜彎。觀察細(xì)微，理解深刻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山鄉(xiāng)竹枝詞</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">誰(shuí)將月餅掛林梢，解渴充饑兼解嘲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六月圓過(guò)十五，盤中月餅亦佳肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑居山野把詩(shī)敲，野趣野花頗耐撩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水色山光云影俏，田夫野老笑東郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東鄰閑話說(shuō)西郊，八卦爐中柴亂燒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">說(shuō)長(zhǎng)說(shuō)短全都戲，情報(bào)豐饒賽酒肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溪流曲折或塘坳，中有魚(yú)兒影動(dòng)搖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃發(fā)垂髫心自樂(lè)，垂綸觀釣各妖嬈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">五</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敲詩(shī)夜里頗心焦，仄仄平平發(fā)亂薅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古典新聞齊上陣，秦瓊關(guān)羽各揮刀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">六</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雞鳴不已意全消，枕上成詩(shī)死細(xì)胞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隱隱晨曦魚(yú)肚白，蟲(chóng)聲唧唧似輕嘲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">七</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩(shī)成七步慕三曹，二句三年答島郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我亦白頭吟哦苦，解嘲無(wú)解唯自嘲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：竹枝詞也被你一路長(zhǎng)歌了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受剛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">2025中秋竹枝詞</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">一</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉兔東升掛樹(shù)梢，有魚(yú)有酒有佳肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">更兼云腿潘祥記，賞月敲詩(shī)待故交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">縱有家資百萬(wàn)鈔，高樓依舊障眉梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">團(tuán)圓三五秋高夜，賞月還需赴遠(yuǎn)郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處傳來(lái)戰(zhàn)鼓敲，金聲玉振動(dòng)戈矛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">居然文靜娟娟月，卻控錢塘滾滾潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">快遞簽收一手交，我翻孫女表情包。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郵來(lái)月餅含深意，孝順家風(fēng)自小教。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">五</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明星各自展豐饒，橄欖枝兒接與拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雖有嬋娟千里共，熒屏淡味沒(méi)高潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：文老這組詞筆觸老辣，夠味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【劉先倫】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳中秋作竹枝五首</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">一</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山一帶老城郊，暇日居家作廚庖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千杯碰響西窗竹，明月幾時(shí)上樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕風(fēng)隨我過(guò)山凹，一路秋霜染白茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歸家已是三更后，浪蕩月光揉發(fā)稍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我與明月兩相交，不請(qǐng)自來(lái)共佳肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三杯飲罷君需去，年年清風(fēng)在樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不要光陰把人拋，只用光陰釀佳肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">打開(kāi)前年桂花酒，又將明月舀進(jìn)匏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">五</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我邀明月月在梢，三五之夜鳥(niǎo)歸巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東籬黃花西院酒，卻話梅花數(shù)六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：清風(fēng)明月，酒?；ㄏ悖栊腥迦?，人有散閑心。先倫這組中秋竹枝詞文字清通，語(yǔ)言流暢，閑身樂(lè)世更無(wú)憂便是作者的境況了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙以順】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">竹枝詞．秋</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">籬外霜枝倚石坳，生來(lái)不喜入塵淆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一壺淡茗邀云坐，任你風(fēng)來(lái)滿樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鬢雪何妨對(duì)酒肴，且將年月入鍋炰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑來(lái)漫數(shù)庭前葉，一片飛時(shí)一解嘲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舊巷苔深在石凹，燕兒零落各分巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惟余杯酒邀明月，不向光陰發(fā)牢騷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其四</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">流水穿階過(guò)石坳，年華彈指任風(fēng)拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">案頭只守殘書(shū)卷，夕照空庭老樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其五</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逝去青春幾斗筲，挨刀歲月如煎炮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昔年那個(gè)千翻女，轉(zhuǎn)眼霜風(fēng)落發(fā)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其六</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逝水湯湯在髮梢，浮生恍若一空嵺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">是非得失皆拋卻，笑在風(fēng)中只自嘲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：若兮這組詞，有閑云野鶴共幽盟的恬淡，也有青鏡流年看發(fā)變的惆悵。笑在風(fēng)中只自嘲，只字換成且字或許好些。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?【祝西峰】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">無(wú) 眠</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">記得當(dāng)時(shí)媚眼拋，情真情假費(fèi)推敲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四更山月西窗落，枕上思來(lái)睫未交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">登 門</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竹筍參差正解苞，清風(fēng)偕我過(guò)山坳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">塆頭只有君家住，笨鳥(niǎo)飛飛落柳梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:22px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：祝兄用記得二字回首年少，將少年男女的青澀感情刻畫(huà)入木三分。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">閑置山舍吟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">一</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青瓦泥墻立遠(yuǎn)郊，階前盡是野生茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗封鎖銹門堅(jiān)閉，時(shí)有蟲(chóng)聲出屋梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當(dāng)年佳客訪如潮，今?？諛橇⑦h(yuǎn)郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雜草已然封舊徑，蛛絲盈滿燕兒巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">檐下新陳蛛網(wǎng)交，籬邊蔓草隱墻坳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">盛開(kāi)丹桂無(wú)人賞，一任金風(fēng)四處拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑瞥林園覆蓬蒿，一叢野卉悄含苞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何時(shí)田舍無(wú)人問(wèn)，蛛網(wǎng)盤門綠蔓高。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：牟女史這幾首竹枝詞，以銹門、蛛網(wǎng)、蔓草等意象表達(dá)了老屋猶在，人去樓空的悵觸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【謝勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">竹枝詞</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">一</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前塵妄見(jiàn)未全拋，曠歲役身歸一庖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">貧識(shí)陰晴人頓悟，老因澹泊與詩(shī)交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">二</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">形役城隅事一庖，年來(lái)鮮訪舊知交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何時(shí)並對(duì)南山色，大雅詩(shī)歌薦酒肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">三</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">久營(yíng)食肆為安巢，微利從來(lái)未肯拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼一城蕭瑟甚，家貧老幼是鞭鞘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙里煎烹作上肴，暇余還把小詩(shī)敲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>揮毫調(diào)鼎意同樣，慮事細(xì)微看島郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">五</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">病里店門人不敲，無(wú)憀情緒更紛淆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">年光似此真虛擲，畫(huà)虎文章來(lái)自嘲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：拙作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">竹枝詞</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（一）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春風(fēng)吹過(guò)小城郊，喜鵲喳喳鬧樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">久盼三郎難見(jiàn)影，窗前獨(dú)對(duì)繡荷包。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（二）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月下蓮塘柳樹(shù)梢，鴛鴦戲水忘歸巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">菱花鏡里秋霜鬢，忍把相思向水拋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：明鵬善游泳，更善歌詠愛(ài)情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【廖德勛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竹枝詞．秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白頭蘆葦滿荒郊，起伏隨風(fēng)卷似潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫想人間折腰事，滄桑不覺(jué)掛眉梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忍看高樓隔蓬茅，葉凋山頹倍寂寥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">流光無(wú)限愁無(wú)限，不在樹(shù)梢在眉梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：竹枝曲曲嘆時(shí)艱，生事蕭條樂(lè)事刪。多愁還使鬢毛斑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【唐嘉誠(chéng)】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">火燒舟竹枝詞</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">大洞埡</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">石筍岧岧云鳥(niǎo)巢，山橫若屏百仞坳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">伏流十丈出魚(yú)泉，下入樂(lè)安過(guò)東郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">通濟(jì)橋</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱徐二人伴荒茅，未見(jiàn)當(dāng)時(shí)卜六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遵湄通衢由此去，一劍高懸斬黑蛟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">板角山</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大小板角兩相交，攔牛古關(guān)豈好剿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楊青青龍水不復(fù)，應(yīng)龍舊事付荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">金刀坑</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楊家遺業(yè)沒(méi)荒郊，詭談志異多荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄉(xiāng)人常禱借碗筷，如此也好炊飯肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">羊 巖</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一峰戛然插云霄，打兒軼聞匿山坳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">求子擲石必得子，數(shù)縷飄紅掛樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">官 城</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">友愛(ài)相爭(zhēng)事迢迢，三撫舊城化荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湯餅祭之保產(chǎn)厄，迎春上馬幾相交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">斗牛斗雞城</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古播遺愛(ài)幾飄搖，斗牛斗雞隱蒿茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">行樂(lè)無(wú)極長(zhǎng)歡喜，哪堪王師一朝剿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">火燒舟城門</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乙木辛金對(duì)相邀，癸水丁火卜六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">試問(wèn)鄭家場(chǎng)中人，保爺門笑高樹(shù)梢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">佘家院子</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仰走橫行蛇兩條，浩氣沖天兩相交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俱看派系人才出，振聾發(fā)聵響東郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">?江西會(huì)館（萬(wàn)壽宮）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">牌坊舊事事已遙，荷香風(fēng)善隱荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">改廟建學(xué)真先進(jìn)，澤被早在白云巢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">湖廣會(huì)館（禹王宮）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大禹事跡沒(méi)前朝，耆老下世睡荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尋訪考察都無(wú)望，一詩(shī)紀(jì)之問(wèn)六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">香迎亭</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">香迎亭中善吹簫，昆高胡彈燈并交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玩友圍鼓鈞天樂(lè)，民季十一付荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">張爺廟（恒侯宮）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">恒侯英靈沖云霄，推行新學(xué)卜六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紹甫承首復(fù)舊址，一堂名師化東郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">顯應(yīng)宮（天后宮）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">男女合校致舜堯，果伯首倡破荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">創(chuàng)舉猶為人樂(lè)道，治學(xué)大名響東郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">四川會(huì)館（川主廟）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蜀郡太守歌舜堯，潤(rùn)澤千秋益四郊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄉(xiāng)中川人常會(huì)此，川主土主問(wèn)六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">白衣庵（大士廟）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慈航道人點(diǎn)柳條，白衣普渡引六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">婦孺爭(zhēng)相來(lái)禱告，家人清吉食素肴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">字庫(kù)塔（化紙爐）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">火燒舊名事迢遙，祈保平安卜六爻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">以培文風(fēng)并吉風(fēng)，一帆高揚(yáng)自此交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">荊桂莊老店子</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荊桂軼事總寥寥，先生于今入荒茅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身死仍有精魂在，耿耿昭昭兩相交。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：給嘉誠(chéng)小友點(diǎn)個(gè)贊，雖然有些地方?jīng)]去過(guò)，這組詩(shī)讀后，似曾到過(guò)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p>