<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 目 錄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩 二、選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩 四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">立秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時序更新暑氣收，興安始覺小涼秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山青未減千重翠，水碧仍涵一脈幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朝露凝枝風(fēng)漸爽，暮云帶雨意方稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">塵心洗凈高天遠，靜謐林都畫里游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游林區(qū)小鎮(zhèn)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山林沃野浴霞光，溪水潺湲百卉香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鎮(zhèn)小方榮多錦繡，疇平正茂少彷徨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">帳篷靜臥春秋夢，樹榭高懸客旅房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)雨同行欣路遠，詩情畫韻入禪鄉(xiāng)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二 、 選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">園丁贊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一支銀筆馳天下，三尺講臺風(fēng)雨中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">汗水澆開花萬朵，芬芳世界美名贏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二（坡底韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">招募辛勞為萬家，丹心傾盡付韶華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滴滴汗水書真愛，款款深情育麗花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三尺講臺神圣路，一園蓓蕾滿天霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卓絕貢獻人稱頌，學(xué)子莘莘敬美茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">毛主席逝世49周年詠懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘇秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲歲今朝念潤公，音容宛在憶無窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星星烽火燃原野，獵獵旌旗傲碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">無數(shù)英靈垂大義，幾多勇士立奇功。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人民永記輝煌史，談笑常存旭日紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋景吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鞠馥陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蕭瑟秋風(fēng)爽且涼，無垠稻浪舞金黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天高宇渺云如幕，地闊山低霧似墻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">登嶺爺孫尋菌落，下河姐弟覓魚秧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茫茫沃野果蔬味，喜覽吟詩祝稔祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唐多令?伯牙絕弦（劉過體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張建國</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 旋律醉河山，音符驚百川。十指間、波浪滔天。流水知音曾妙品，子期意，伯牙緣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 魂斷祭臺邊，撫弦新土前。曲中幽、月冷煙寒。摔破瑤琴從此后，君不在，對誰彈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄭坤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">森林里的家，九月菊如麻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">攜友聞山靜，邀君賞谷斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西風(fēng)秋雁去，細雨霽云遮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">養(yǎng)老新天地，閑斟茉莉花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔商調(diào)·秦樓月〕臺球哥們</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賀聲林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一聲喚，老哥幾個爭著練。爭著練，你來我往，侃侃稱贊。〔幺〕輸球宴請郭家店，三鮮餃子酸汁蘸。醋汁蘸，小燒四兩，酒柔球傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔黃鐘?賀勝朝〕興安秋夢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山清水秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一夜間，彩林燃，楓韻綿，疊翠流丹結(jié)客緣。千峰流霞雁影翩，賞不盡醉心田，意難收魂夢牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔仙呂?醉扶歸〕秋日感懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">周亞元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春姐難為客，秋妹快如梭。常憶當(dāng)年小帥哥，牽手河邊坐。一片真心付我，承起千斤諾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云之幻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 牽云何必到康橋，東澤碧空秋練飄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幻若仙宮浮浩宇，狀如靈鶴舞青霄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峰巒逸影添佳趣，龍鳳奇姿惹興饒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">目賞斑斕心已醉，閑行柳岸聽吹簫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 溪水公園 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李相文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">泉溪湖碧蕩晶漣，泊處存租彩飾船。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畫舫樓舟團客駛，動圈電艇父娃旋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鰱翩鯉擺追游俏，侶拽郎劃波涌妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水韻幽亭歌詠樂，花堤柳岸鍥巖鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">虞美人?蕎麥花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老疙瘩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三伏無奈種蕎麥，那咱農(nóng)時迫。秋收場院樂分糧，餃子面條攤餅慰饑腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 少年不解田疇美，總把山花比。而今花甲憶當(dāng)年，漫嘆春妮攜手粉香間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我家的小園</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金淑芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小園十步碧畦連，紫色茄子瓜帶牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青辣椒尖擎玉盞，黃玉米老列金鈿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">土藏豆薯香應(yīng)掘，風(fēng)送蔥芹露水綿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四季但教勤手種，人間至味在籬邊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旗袍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細品歲月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一襲清妝曼妙風(fēng)，多姿曲線素綃中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相宜濃淡流豐韻，無比端莊蘊細工。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">似水柔波嬌俏透，如蓮綽態(tài)雅嫻融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人間彩袂千千款，怎敵云裳此段紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋韻（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋灑清霖冷氣襲，淋園潤土浸花池。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枚枚翠葉托嬌卉，朵朵鮮葩展艷姿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">銜露山菊朝洗面，吸塵野草暮添衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑翁信步觀風(fēng)景，滿眼霜英滿眼詩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔南呂·干荷葉〕秋荷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姜佩軍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 抽吧臉，小皴脖，怨氣些兒個。意蹉跎，影婆娑。模樣這般怎見小情哥？禁不住淚花兒落。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 興 題</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉安民</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天高云氣爽，鶯啼艷陽秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠地擎花海，清波蕩畫舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝶飛蜂戀蕊，燕舞景酣眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把酒芳菲處，霞殘興未休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 行香子 秋行 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金 鈺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雨潤深秋，云隱長空。看葉飄、逐夢隨風(fēng)。歸鴻已遠，楓韻初濃。正遠山幽，近山媚，半山紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 笑顏長駐，心閑?？v，盡情游、遍賞芳叢。蘇杭入目，吳越相逢。嘆筆鋒鈍，詩囊瘦，意難窮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西柏坡頌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莊善學(xué)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">太行東麓柏坡村，圣地親臨感舊恩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三役決勝天地轉(zhuǎn)，二中開濟典章存。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">油燈熠熠催征鼓，石磨粼粼印戰(zhàn)痕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">趕考初心長在念，山河新貌映朝暾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 自畫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漁舟唱晚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荏苒星霜七秩間，白駒過隙逝華年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青青雙鬢絲凝雪，默默半生云合煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情淡惟耽山水竹，身微卻愛酒詩蓮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宇清川碧心眸愜，夕照紅斜效古賢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李風(fēng)山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一葉才飛暑漸收，藕花香艷水悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫言宋玉皆悲意，寄語詩心別樣秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金風(fēng)吹皺碧沙州，處暑揮鐮共獻酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩日微涼時轉(zhuǎn)覺，樵翁自笑逐清流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">范連韌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昨夜寒風(fēng)入古林，經(jīng)霜秋葉散黃金。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溪邊草敗飛鷹起，嶺上松雄云谷深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迎日單騎游畫路，板橋獨佇悟清音。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">榮枯頻變催人淚，行樂其時守自心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教師節(jié)感懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薛淑春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霞彩家河映，流年逝水同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">園丁裁翠綠，蠟燭灼殷紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾沐桃花雨，猶經(jīng)楊柳風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耕耘多少載，今已白頭翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天，踩山珍感賦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相運臣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">為踩鮮珍起五更，鄰家犬吠路人驚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">殘星伴月行程遠，已到山前旭日迎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">左拄杖，右持藤，舉頭細聽鳥和鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒼松挺拔沖天宇，草木幽香大地情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">同題百首不嫌多</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張慧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">同題百首不嫌多，揮筆精敲自有哦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作賦評秦由宋句，謀章敘漢用唐歌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩詞字話天天累，韻律音頻娓娓挪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">意境壯懷還曠遠，豈愁衰鬢已蹉跎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">品瓜抒懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉文波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒂落西瓜早謝花，汁甘潤味富農(nóng)家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清涼解暑游姑贊，送爽怡心品眾夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可口香留盈玉齒，瓤酥氣溢化紅霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迄今總幻豐收景，個大渾圓臥野涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜市小吃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遠望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十色湖邊龍子巖，五光味覺不平凡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄉(xiāng)音頻出欲仙醉，一辣方知解百饞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不堪老去</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姜濤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自從春別后，不忍見秋光，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欲到云窮處，低聲問夕陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詠秋(七古)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常剛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一場秋雨一場涼，一層落葉一地黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東籬紫菊爭嬌俏，西墻綠柳覆輕霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丹楓映日燃林海，稻菽盈疇漫野香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫道江山多寂寥，金風(fēng)似酒慰衷腸。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斗轉(zhuǎn)星移又值秋，水落石出漾清流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金風(fēng)颯颯催楓赤，玉露盈盈染岫幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天遠云閑征雁過，川晴林疏斜陽透。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稻花香里話豐歲，與君同進一杯酒。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 秋月孤舟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朦朧月色照扁舟，秀穗蒹葭翠飾秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只影孤燈空望遠，思夫露重洗青眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?秋月孤舟》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月影婆娑蕩小舟，蘆花菡葉飾初秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">思君玉女空遙望，淚洗嬌容抹眼眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕·秋月孤舟》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月灑銀輝照葉舟，涼風(fēng)颯颯已知秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嬌姝思念夫君遠，淚打濕襟腫杏眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">散天花*白露(舒亶體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云淡天高到仲秋。西風(fēng)吹細雨，入溪流。蕭蕭枯葉落悠悠。抬頭看雁字、不停留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莊戶忙將稻菽收。村村飄喜氣，谷糧優(yōu)。農(nóng)忙季莭怎能休。大秋收碩果、勁頭遒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【散天花?白露】（新韻-依舒亶體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 天爽云薄又仲秋。涼風(fēng)遮暑熱，順川流。漂浮落葉蕩悠悠。農(nóng)機鳴沃野、未停留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 山寨頻將粒米收。鄉(xiāng)間傳喜訊，大田優(yōu)。時逢刈谷不能休。騷人詩鼓勁、韻方遒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">散天花?白露(舒亶體)步韻刁老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凝露天涼又值秋。風(fēng)蕭捎冷雨，釀寒流。雖無孤寂意悠悠。云邊鴻雁去、卻難留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">田壟翻金五谷收。農(nóng)家傳喜訊，稻粱優(yōu)。驅(qū)車搶運不言休。曬場忙脫粒、勁方遒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清波引*處暑(姜夔體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">季來時轉(zhuǎn)。別炎熱、暑天不見。夏除秋換。爽氣四方漫。練翅備南旅，只只遷飛芻燕。又來澍雨瀟瀟。暑無了、灼消散。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋光爛熳。日高照、田野燦燦。黍禾豐滿。把豐產(chǎn)謀算。今又好年景，喜滿農(nóng)家籬院。風(fēng)調(diào)雨順人和，盼田高產(chǎn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻刁老前輩【清波引?處暑】（新韻-依姜夔體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 時節(jié)輪轉(zhuǎn)。告別暑、昱年再見。夏秋更換。晨暮冷風(fēng)現(xiàn)。練翼儲能量，候鳥尋回南苑。適逢濃露微淋，暑雖盡、熱沒散。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 西霞璀璨。昊天亮、原野爛漫。粒實漿滿。把糧草估算。今逢風(fēng)調(diào)順，笑看村屯籬院。勤耕細作精培，土肥多產(chǎn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻刁老前輩《清波引·處暑》（新韻-姜夔體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 時間飛轉(zhuǎn)。暑別去、熱天少見。夏蔥秋爛。涼爽繞身漫。鍛煉翅強壯，候鳥南歸攜眷。早晨珠露滴滴，暑無影、酷炎散。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋光已現(xiàn)。宇穹碧、原野熣燦。谷菽漿滿。把成本推算。今年莊田好，舉酒飄香農(nóng)院，風(fēng)調(diào)雨順連連，定能增產(chǎn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清波引?處暑步韻刁老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">流光飛轉(zhuǎn)。正秋至、雨云驟見。熱涼相換。百里瑟風(fēng)漫。候鳥急匆去，怎挽南樓歸燕。一時木葉蕭蕭，天初冷、客游散。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋霞爛熳。恰還是、山色燦燦。沃疇盈滿。對成色推算。皆趁此時序，不誤新糧回院。農(nóng)家切盼寬余，寄情豐產(chǎn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西地錦. 家鄉(xiāng)秋韻 (依蔡伸體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 朗霽斜陽薄暮?；療熛加穸取Ｇ锍厮疂M，紅蓮綽態(tài)，鴛游蛙鼓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 雁陣南飛何處？引鄉(xiāng)愁難數(shù)。豐田錦秀，蘭堂誦詠，風(fēng)華遙睹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師【西地錦?家鄉(xiāng)秋韻】（新韻-依蔡伸體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 望眼棲霞沉暮?，F(xiàn)煙云飛度。荷塘碧水，赤蓮嫵媚，鶩嬉蟾鼓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 歸雁南征何處？惦家鄉(xiāng)無數(shù)。硒都沃野，同窗論賦，韶光遙睹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《西地錦·家鄉(xiāng)秋韻》（新韻-蔡坤體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遠眺夕陽沉暮。晚霞隨云度。池塘夜色，睡蓮媚態(tài)，鳥棲蛙鼓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 飛雁南歸何處？夢家山無數(shù)。城鄉(xiāng)美麗，田園沃土，登高遙睹。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕?冰城與裴兄相聚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七載相識歲月悠，冰城得聚在金秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">說詩敘舊言難盡，美酒杯杯心海流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和力平會長《七絕?冰城與裴兄相聚》（新韻-折腰體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">擁抱夕陽心海悠，方桌敘舊在初秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煮酒吟詩山與水，俺同才女互交流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻力平會長《七絕·冰城與裴兄相聚》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">互和詩篇韻律悠，相逢哈市正金秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">才男才女抒情賦，舉酒吟歌佳作留。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律. 孟秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心曠神怡慮邇遙，初秋又度暑臨消。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">藍天霽現(xiàn)云煙美，青岫嵐遮霧氣寥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幾葉金黃楓下落，雙花銀粉菡中嬌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蟬鳴蛙鼓無辭念，且待鴻圖粱稻描。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律?孟秋》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">爾濱休假特逍遙，秋入三伏暑漸消。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠水悠悠蓮葦美，青山隱隱靄煙寥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幾枚枯葉風(fēng)吹落，多束鮮花露浴嬌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">片片畦田依信作，幅幅偉卷靠誠描。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望遠行*立秋(詞二首.李珣體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">烈日炎炎暑未消。溫度依然盛高。翩翩小雨下牛毛。突然時節(jié)唱秋謠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋已到，畝難描。累煞農(nóng)家苦勞。良田千頃穗豐饒。碩秋金果正風(fēng)調(diào)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時令頻來又立秋。禾黍生機正遒。灌漿度粒奔豐收。放眸田野綠油油。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋季至，豈能休。管好肥田沃疇。風(fēng)調(diào)雨順好年頭。庶民生活再登樓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【望遠行（二首）?立秋】（新韻-依李珣體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（1）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 炙日如爐熱未消。烘烤仍然很高。偶淋細雨若絨毛。季節(jié)輪到詠秋謠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋又入，累難描。灑汗農(nóng)民苦勞。畦田連片好豐饒。稻菽漿滿正風(fēng)調(diào)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">（2）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 節(jié)氣輪回又現(xiàn)秋。苞谷喝漿正遒。農(nóng)家預(yù)測再豐收。舉頭畦地綠油油。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋已至，不能休。備好農(nóng)機刈疇。豐收在望有甜頭。賺錢迎娶置高樓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《望遠行（二首)·立秋》（新韻-李珣體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 酷暑依然熱未消。溫度難低過高。有時雨水細如毛。到來節(jié)氣賦秋謠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋又蒞，庶黎描。汗透衣襟累勞。田園著色好妖嬈。灌漿填粒正風(fēng)調(diào)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 節(jié)令輪回又到秋。菽谷成熟正遒。通風(fēng)鏟草助豐收。遠觀畦壟綠油油。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 秋已到，怎能休。管理加強地疇。生活美好在前頭。囤盈盆滿上層樓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望遠行?立秋步韻刁老</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步入初秋燥意消。云淡風(fēng)輕宇高。時飄陣雨細如毛。晚霞明月映童謠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">包谷語，稻菽描。最慕耕夫耐勞。欣愉沃野韻豐饒。幸得天壤共協(xié)調(diào)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遍野蔥蘢已覺秋。顆粒歸真已遒。田間五谷釀豐收。閏年時下綠油油。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)悄掠，志無休。此際仍須理疇。勤耘善管樂心頭。滿倉盈囤上層樓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">語言精道.筆法獨到</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">--賞析詩詞大家刁柏春的《鷓鴣天》祭屈原</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鞠馥陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 昨日，偶翻2016年的《林都詩詞》，刁柏春的一首詞《鷓鴣天-祭屈原》，赫然跳入我的眼簾！令我反復(fù)吟誦，嘆為佳作，頓生仰慕，眾皆贊刁老是詩詞大家，果然名不虛傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天-祭屈原（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 穿越時空古至今，年年端午祭忠魂。《離騷》書憤燃團火，《天問》宏音震浩坤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 臣耿耿，帝昏昏。汩河悲淚哭靈均。高風(fēng)亮節(jié)全民仰，憑吊中華愛國人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 全詞是對屈原的祭奠與贊頌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 上闕寫屈原的生平偉績：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 作者沒有直述屈原的愛國行為和主張，而巧妙的引用屈原本人的著作《離騷》與《天問》用以佐證，展現(xiàn)出偉大愛國詩人屈原的愛國愛民情懷，在《離騷》中，屈原滿懷激情地傾訴了他對楚國及人民的真摯熱愛，也毛遂自薦說出自己就是善于治國理政，勇于為民鞠躬盡粹的很有能力的那個人！可恨可悲的是昏庸的楚王聽信奸侫近臣的誹謗之言，排斥并流放了屈原……。屈原在《天問》中，一口氣問了一百七十多個問題，他幾近瘋癲，悲怒交加，責(zé)問天道何在？楚國前途何在？國民安康何在？……屈原的悲憤的怒吼久久環(huán)響在天地之間。作者通過這樣的兩個對仗語句全景式的向讀者簡捷而生動地介紹并高度贊評了偉大愛國詩人輝煌的一生。語句雖少，卻強似千言萬語。同時，也間接而巧妙地回答了詞起片句“穿越時空古至今”丶“年年端午祭忠魂”的緣由與實況，把全詞的主題闡明的更清晰，更完美。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 下闕重在抒情。僅用“臣耿耿”與“帝昏昏”兩個對偶句就充分地寫出屈原的愛國忠民的偉大情懷和行動，一針見血地抨擊了楚王的昏潰無能。偉大愛國詩人在殉國后，滔滔的汨羅江水也因同情屈原而大哭不止。這里作者用屈原的乳名《靈均》稱呼他，更顯出親切與景仰，充分表達了作者對屈原的追悼之情丶熱愛之烈。下片的最后兩句強調(diào)了為什么全國人民年年憑吊屈原，因他是一位中華民族永遠景仰丶愛戴的愛國大詩人！他愛民如子，愛國勝家，他從不喊一句空口號，竟懷揣一抔國土投入汨羅江中，以命許國付民，以死捍國保民。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 本首《鷓鴣天-祭屈原》，盡可全方位地領(lǐng)料到作者在詞學(xué)方面的底蘊與修為。用字洗練，有章有序；寫法靈動，張弛有度?？梢哉f：這是一首可賞可學(xué)的范作。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五 結(jié)卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">從教感懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">答疑解惑獻青春，甘願終生付苦辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">授業(yè)詩書須滿腹，育人品德要修身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一根粉筆年和歲，三尺講臺天與晨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時日悠悠霜染發(fā)，不圖名利不貪薪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">終生從教歷冬春，苦累天天不訴辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">授課講堂傳識確，為人榜樣正行身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文章批改常熬夜，書卷翻看屢早晨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蠟炬成灰始干淚，點燃光亮作柴薪。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主辦：律詩審稿組</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">策劃：刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">編輯：吳華彪 陳國田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">制版兼審核：陳國田</span></p>