<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二五年八月下社課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用平水韻一先七言律詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集簡評(píng) ：牟明英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊頭題字 ：謝宗山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇編輯 ：趙以順</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">?</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">?乙巳立秋后九日隨詩會(huì)諸君登婁山，限韻為雅韻群社課</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩氣沉雄壯碧巔，迢遙景致落眸前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一關(guān)高聳長云渺，九曲宏開盛日?qǐng)A。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)動(dòng)幽巒思往昔，跡名青史剩烽煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百年霧雨凄迷甚，救世匡時(shí)幾俊賢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">賞讀：幽險(xiǎn)婁山，近在眼前，青史名跡，只剩烽煙……觀風(fēng)吊古憶時(shí)賢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙學(xué)鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">立秋后隨房車駐習(xí)水背兒山</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">枕向家園夢不全，兒時(shí)記憶散如煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舊街零落新區(qū)側(cè)，夏熟收藏秋雨前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">半世歸來仍作客，千山訪遍未逢仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隨車暫歇云峰上，悵對(duì)窗間落日?qǐng)A。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：舊夢如煙，些許悵然，半生已過，落日孤懸……訪仙千里盡無緣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">修車有感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前路迢迢費(fèi)引牽，驅(qū)馳忍性再加鞭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾經(jīng)赤水千回夢，待續(xù)婁山百轉(zhuǎn)篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">古道西風(fēng)歸病馬，荒煙衰草入殘年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人車一體疲奔命，不為相憐為自憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：夢縈赤水，心系婁山，車如故友，甘苦十年……人老車殘一瞬間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【謝 勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳年七月朔日不寐以詩</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">生涯心事恐難眠，樽酒樂于謀稻先。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">華夏復(fù)蘇雖有夢，暮齡花發(fā)恨無錢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">樊籠久困沖霄志，市井豈供王會(huì)篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">擇虱信誰成令仆，塵埃躑躅漫年年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：心事縈牽，今宵無眠，暮齡余恨，塵境寒慳……志鎖樊籠夢不圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">賀老曹廣社成立</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟幟新張粵海邊，老曹結(jié)社攬時(shí)賢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楚庭霽色塵氛斂，秋夜清輝皎月懸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吐論襟情閑訪古，濯纓氣韻懶逃禪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">機(jī)鋒不減針流弊，擬以文翰問九天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：老曹結(jié)社，張幟聚賢，超凡脫俗，文叩九天……高情豪氣筆頭研。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【鐘 華】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">安康探親并重游長安</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">客路秋風(fēng)過漢川，金州城郭入蒼煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江分楚蜀千帆遠(yuǎn)，山接秦巴一雁翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舊夢重尋長樂道，殘碑猶記盛唐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鐘樓月照登臨處，又拂塵衣話昔緣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：鐘樓月照，帆遠(yuǎn)碑殘，秋風(fēng)客路，又話昔緣……舊跡重尋意未闌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【劉先倫】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳處暑游共青湖假寐</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">午后荷花輕起舞，半山綠樹度流年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幽聲隨我湖邊走，怨雨跟風(fēng)掌上眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白日尋歡何用酒，青春作伴覓吟蟬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倏然小睡夢千古，無限星河搖響泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：荷花綠樹，最是自然，忘機(jī)愜意，流于筆端……俗事何曾擾我閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">無 題</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">又乘秋風(fēng)叩木船，脫衣入水白云邊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依稀烈日蒸湖水，倏忽韶光流酒涎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">皓首雄心空有夢，青衿短志是無錢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">還來垂釣碧溪上，醉里乾坤又一年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：秋風(fēng)烈日，皓首木船，韶光不在，幾夢得圓……且拋俗事水云間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【祝西峰】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>秋 夜</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倦鳥歸巢夕照殘，林煙數(shù)縷下秋田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寶峰山上燈侵閣，大堰塘中水映天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">樹影參差庭院里，蟲聲斷續(xù)酒樽前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">微醺更有敲詩興，不說官場說自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：倦鳥林煙，夕照秋田，閣燈美酒，影綴庭園……愜借微醺話自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">春 夜</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚云漠漠落花天，聽斷鷓鴣與杜鵑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老鏡驚心愁白鬢，孤燈怵目照寒氈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三更冷月唯長嘆，一夜繁星竟未眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">回首當(dāng)年風(fēng)雨路，共君攜手兩相憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：晚云落花，孤燈寒氈，境凄情切，鬢老燈寒……華年雖遠(yuǎn)意綿綿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">午 后</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">消暑前來幽徑穿，野亭小憩戲金蟬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忽而電閃涼風(fēng)襲，俄頃雷鳴驟雨?duì)俊?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遙望九天云靄靄，無驚四處葉翩翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">須臾霽止歡聲作，七彩橫空畫一弦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">拙作。漫行遇雨，小憩戲蟬，班門弄斧，湊韻尋閑……彩虹得見喜眉間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙以順】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">?彼岸花</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孑立忘川只自憐，猩紅染盡九秋煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">葉生不見花時(shí)艷，花放難逢葉蔓連。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朧月冰姿凝露泣，迎風(fēng)幽怨逐波傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三生石畔相思債，一瓣飄零一夢牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：三生不見，一瓣愁牽，縱是無語，卻蘊(yùn)千言……情深緣淺恨無邊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">侍 病</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兒行千里母心牽，母病床前兒不眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">生我鞠我何辛苦，如竹如松卻暮年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一母九雛皆長大，九兒一母怎為難。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我兒今似出林筍，未料他年畫餅圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">賞讀：兒多母苦，自古一言，春暉難報(bào)，寸草情牽……久病榻前幾人探。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【唐嘉誠】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳七夕后，睹《勝廣墨試》，次思南王東麓先生韻</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">榜題應(yīng)制作遺篇，桑梓仍多軼事傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">藝海存名洇冷月，蓬山留翰待寒煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聲傳冀北三千里，譽(yù)著黔南五尺天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幾許癡心偏及我，更和同道話奇緣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：以為步韻，實(shí)則揚(yáng)賢，佳名遠(yuǎn)播，與賢結(jié)緣……同持清譽(yù)出黔南。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【周國慶】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">重登婁山關(guān)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)雨滄桑百十年，寒林叢莽起狼煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩吟蒼嶺從頭越，雁過長空有句傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倥傯生涯皆去矣，蹉跎歲月已茫然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而今我亦登高處，遙想舜堯嘆逝川。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：偉人筆墨，又在眼前，歷經(jīng)風(fēng)雨，史跡昭然……重登舊處嘆流年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受剛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">2015年8月偕妻及孫女出游半月，因車站機(jī)場嚴(yán)禁吸煙而隱忍數(shù)日后習(xí)慣之，歸家后竟戒除多年煙癮，一晃十載感而作此。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十載三千六百天，換來夢繞與魂?duì)俊?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">頻遭熏肺頻添咳，每具憂心每失眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高鐵動(dòng)車皆有約，機(jī)場航站史無前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出游半月如何了，只在夢中抽過煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：數(shù)年煙癮，半月心煎，轉(zhuǎn)瞬十載，夢縈魂?duì)俊宦冒a除亦愜然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【牟明鵬】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">游桐梓小西湖</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">群峰環(huán)簇鏡湖眠，谷底天門有洞天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">絕類桂林山與水，來看西子柳如煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">將軍客路經(jīng)千里，羈旅萍蹤不計(jì)年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">向晚西風(fēng)驚斷雁，秋蟲淺唱白云邊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">賞讀：小游桐梓，仿入江南，將軍羈旅，最是情牽……斷雁秋蟲吟筆憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p>