??中國(guó)對(duì)聯(lián)???每日一對(duì)? <p class="ql-block">評(píng)委: 何小鑍</p><p class="ql-block">從本期出句，我看到王品志老師如同一位畫(huà)家，他采用白描的手法，給我們描繪了一個(gè)人對(duì)著鏡子，突然發(fā)現(xiàn)自己兩鬢已經(jīng)布滿白發(fā)的情景。</p><p class="ql-block">出句向我們展示了歲月在人身上留下的痕跡，傳達(dá)出一種對(duì)時(shí)光流逝、容顏老去的驚訝與感慨。出句中的“才知”一詞看似過(guò)渡平平，卻有著情感上的轉(zhuǎn)折。出句先平靜地?cái)⑹鰟?dòng)作，然后陡然揭示出令人揪心的事實(shí)，一剎那間，感覺(jué)照鏡的就是對(duì)句的每一個(gè)“我”。</p><p class="ql-block">要對(duì)好出句，我覺(jué)得可以從兩方面入手：一是補(bǔ)景，即將場(chǎng)景合理地延伸，從另外一個(gè)角度，通過(guò)相似或相反的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行對(duì)句。二是抒情，從“才知”二字可知，照鏡者內(nèi)心是有所觸動(dòng)的，有著對(duì)青春不再的嘆惋。出句還將白發(fā)比作霜，給人的冰冷、滄桑之感也不容忽視。</p> 對(duì)句佳構(gòu)品鑒 <p class="ql-block">本期一共收到對(duì)句650比，經(jīng)過(guò)650-142-96-54-35三輪評(píng)選，評(píng)出佳句35比。結(jié)果如下：</p><p class="ql-block">本期入選佳句</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">憑欄尤戀晚霞紅</b>【山水樵歌】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">撫刀猶念玉關(guān)遙【風(fēng)乍起】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">回眸驚覺(jué)俗緣空【念雨】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">卷簾忽見(jiàn)李花殘【天人合一】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">挑燈猶憶劍光寒【逸塵】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">把杯猶憶少年狂【小雪】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">捧書(shū)?；谏倌赉肌局耖g】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">聞鴻更怨故鄉(xiāng)遙【楊敏】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">憑欄猶嘆暮云殘【水之源】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨江又嘆暮帆遲【麥秋】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">經(jīng)年漸覺(jué)故人稀【虛其心索真知】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">憑欄更戀夕陽(yáng)紅【鴻山老道】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">揮毫猶憶少年狂【逸塵】</p> <p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨窗又見(jiàn)杏花濃【??】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨窗頓覺(jué)月輪孤【萱子】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨窗又見(jiàn)暮云深【新】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">歸田自有暮云閑【溫情紳士】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">憑窗又見(jiàn)杏花妍【伍松竹】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">登樓更覺(jué)客懷孤【一縷春風(fēng)】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">憑闌尤戀夕陽(yáng)紅【老馬】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨風(fēng)始感晚秋珍【夏美波】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨窗更惜菊花香【拈花一笑】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨風(fēng)頓感客情長(zhǎng)【陽(yáng)光風(fēng)雨】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">銜杯漸覺(jué)旅懷孤【夢(mèng)鶴】</p> <p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨窗每嘆世途艱【郭小改】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">舉頭更念故鄉(xiāng)親【王閆旭】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">憑欄猶憶少年狂【峪嵐聯(lián)】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">舉杯猶念故鄉(xiāng)遙【閆小妮】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">思鄉(xiāng)不許酒杯空【小白】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">憑欄尤憶梓鄉(xiāng)親【旺旺】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">撫箋忽憶故情遙【驀然回首】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨窗空嘆夕陽(yáng)沉【黃國(guó)喜】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">臨軒方覺(jué)暮云寒【鄒文生】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">憑闌莫嘆客途?！纠钊A】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)鏡才知霜鬢滿【王品志】</p><p class="ql-block">回頭已是晚霞濃【七彩石</p> 誠(chéng)邀君細(xì)品，望吝賜高論！ 盼君再度惠臨