COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 陳婷麗<br><div style="text-align: left;"> The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone 's life .Now I'd like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me .</div><h3 style="text-align: left;"> I learned about some important life skills during the holiday<u>.<font color="#ed2308">For example, I learned to cook some Chinese delicious dishes from my parents, who are good at cooking.</font></u><font color="#ed2308"> </font>Also, I talked to them more than before with my parents in order to improve our relationship .Because of the COVID-19,I developed good hygiene habits <u><font color="#ed2308">as well</font></u>.</h3><font color="#ed2308"><div style="text-align: left;"><font color="#ed2308">Not only did I some skills, but also I got to know how strong our motherland is.</font><span style="color: rgb(39, 45, 52);"> China </span><font color="#ed2308">took steps </font><span style="color: rgb(39, 45, 52);">quickly to </span><font color="#ed2308">prevent the virus spreading</font><span style="color: rgb(39, 45, 52);">. I </span><font color="#ed2308">take pride in</font><span style="color: rgb(39, 45, 52);"> our country and ourselves. I couldn't i</span><font color="#ed2308">magine how difficult it is</font><span style="color: rgb(39, 45, 52);"> to control it .We should </span>express our gratitude <span style="color: rgb(39, 45, 52);">to medical workers.Their hard work </span>paid off.</div></font><div style="text-align: left;"> Although the COVID-19 caused <font color="#ed2308">tons of trouble</font>,I still learned something useful from it.</div><div style="text-align: left;"><br></div><br> 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):要點(diǎn)清晰,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美地道,各種連接詞使用自然,熟練使用所學(xué)的知識(shí)。 <div> </div> COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 殷怡恒 <br> The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone's daily life. Now I'd like to share something about <font color="#ed2308">how the pandemic has changed me. </font><br> I <font color="#ed2308">do </font>have changed a lot. <font color="#ed2308">Thanks to </font>the COVID-19, I used to dislike washing hands, but now I develop good hygiene habits. During that time, I started to get up before 8 am to <font color="#ed2308">cultivate better living habits.</font> I'm sure that I can make it possible to <font color="#ed2308">be self - disciplined</font>. I needed to plan my time <font color="#ed2308">efficiently </font>in order to catch others. As a result, I become healthier and more<font color="#ed2308"> energetic</font>. <font color="#ed2308">As is expected,</font> I learned to cook some Chinese courses. <font color="#ed2308">It's believed that only in this way can I get training and being independent. </font>I know how to take care of myself and also understand the true sense of looking after others. . <br> The pandemic <font color="#ed2308">does </font>have an influence on me . You can't imagine how fascinating I am now. 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):要點(diǎn)齊全,高級(jí)詞匯和搭配是亮點(diǎn),能夠熟練使用各類句型,展示出了學(xué)生良好的語(yǔ)言素養(yǎng)。 COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 唐隱秀<br> The COVID-19pandemic had had a big influence on everyone’s daily life. Now I’d like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me.<br> <font color="#ed2308">First of all, </font>I’ve developed some good hygiene habits. <font color="#ed2308">Washing my hands is always needed every time when I get home or have meals.</font> And I am new used to wearing masks when going out and trying to <font color="#ed2308">keep at least 1 meter distance between me and the other strangers.</font><br> <font color="#ed2308">Secondly, </font>I used to order some food on Mei Tuan whenever I feel hungry but my mother is not home. But now I’ve learned to cook some Chinese dishes online. When I am cooking, I always feel relaxed and happy. <font color="#ed2308">Sometimes I even forgot the disaster that the COVID-19 has brought to this world outside my kitchen. </font><br> <font color="#ed2308">Thirdly, </font>I’ve learned not to<font color="#ed2308"> ignore </font>the wonderful relationship between family members and the beauty of human life. <font color="#ed2308">Lives are so splendid and strong, but at the same time, weak. </font>So, when I get up every morning nowadays, I am grateful to find that I am actually here, <font color="#ed2308">existing and alive.</font> 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):整篇文章層次分明,脈絡(luò)清晰,語(yǔ)言地道準(zhǔn)確,各類高級(jí)表達(dá)方式使用自如,展現(xiàn)出了良好的語(yǔ)言素養(yǎng)。 COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 張雨<br> The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone 's life .Now I'd like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me .<br> As COVID—19 <font color="#ed2308">spreads all around the world, the basic hygiene habits become a part of my life gradually. </font>Washing hands, wearing a mask outside is no longer only some words. <font color="#ed2308">Being not able to go outside, we must have meals at home.</font> So I learned to cook some delicious courses. <font color="#ed2308">Apart from</font> these above, exercise has also become a routine. Now, I run in the morning everyday. sometimes, I <font color="#ed2308">even</font> spend time playing basketball with friends when I am free.<br> <font color="#ed2308">Everything in their being is good for something. So is COVID-19.</font> 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):文字樸實(shí)自然,但同時(shí)不失生動(dòng),非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的使用給文字增加了很多的色彩。結(jié)尾更是本篇文章最大的亮點(diǎn)。 COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 張瑞澤 <br> The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone’s daily life.Now I’d like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me.<br> In the past, I used to have the dinner <font color="#ed2308">without washing my hands.</font> <font color="#ed2308">Wherever I went </font>,I did not wear a mask. However,<font color="#ed2308">after the outbreak of </font>the COVID-19 pandemic,now I have to develop good hygiene habits. At the same time,<font color="#ed2308"> I can’t ignore that the most important thing is that gathering is not allowed. </font>During several months of staying at home,<font color="#ed2308"> when it comes to my achievement, the first thing I think of is that I knew how to cook different kinds of Chinese dishes and I got alone well with my parents.</font><br> In a word, <font color="#ed2308">what a big change has taken place on me after the COVID-19 pandemic.</font> 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):該篇作文的各類從句使用是最大的亮點(diǎn),不僅恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)了主題思想,還讓細(xì)節(jié)變得更完善和生動(dòng)。學(xué)生在該篇文章中展現(xiàn)出了優(yōu)異的英語(yǔ)素養(yǎng)。 COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 劉茜怡<br> The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone’s daily life.Now I’d like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me.<br> In the past, I didn't use to wash my hands after getting home. However,<font color="#ed2308">with the development of COVID-19 pandemic,my good hygiene habits have been developed.Then,</font>the life<font color="#ed2308"> which became a little boring </font>caused me to start to cook some Chinese dishes. <font color="#ed2308">What’s more important ,</font> I found that everyone should<font color="#ed2308"> shoulder the responsibility when there are difficulties in front of us.</font> That will make everything get better.<br> That’s how the pandemic changed me. 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):文字樸實(shí)但立意高遠(yuǎn),要點(diǎn)齊全,能夠較恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂酶黝惔钆?、高?jí)詞匯和各類從句,是一篇優(yōu)秀的考場(chǎng)作文。 COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 周家駿<br> The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone’s daily life.Now I’d like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me.<br> <font color="#ed2308"> Above all, as we know,</font>the most important part to protect us from the virus is to wash hands often or clean our rooms.<font color="#ed2308"> What I learned from it</font> is something meaningful,<font color="#ed2308"> including</font> developing good hygiene habits. <font color="#ed2308">Besides,</font>I have already<font color="#ed2308"> been skilled in</font> cooking some Chinese dishes <font color="#ed2308">so as to </font>treat myself well. Nowadays,this ability is not only useful but also necessary. <font color="#ed2308">What’s more, our bodies are required to get stronger since I do understand the importance of it and try to exercise much more.</font><br> <font color="#ed2308"> In short,</font>COVID-19 has really changed me. 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):該生能夠很好的將學(xué)習(xí)到的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到寫(xiě)作中去,連接詞使用自然,層次分明,是一篇優(yōu)秀的考場(chǎng)作文。 COVID-19 has changed me a lot<br> 1810 蔣唐煦<br> The COVID -19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone’s daily life. Now I’d like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me.<br> Because of the COVID-19,I realized the importance of hygiene. A healthy body <font color="#ed2308">depends on</font> good hygiene habits. <font color="#ed2308">To avoid illness</font>, I must do this.<br> And during the holiday, I always stayed at home, so I learned to cook some Chinese dishes from my parents. By the way, I used to never cook, and I only did some serious eating before. <font color="#ed2308">To keep a balance between health and eating interests, I never ate junk food or takeaways during the holiday.</font><br> I In the end, I’m sure that the epidemic made a great difference to me.<font color="#ed2308"> It was disappointing that there was no congratulation and no reunion in the Spring Festival, but it made me calm and I followed the example of countless medical workers. </font> 教師評(píng)語(yǔ):文章要點(diǎn)齊全,立意深刻,短語(yǔ)的使用恰到好處,語(yǔ)言靈活多樣,讓讀者感到身心愉悅。