<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特別聲明：【芳草園】聯(lián)對(duì)集錦成刊，均已得到參與成員的授權(quán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://m.zit.org.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草園】 聯(lián)對(duì)集錦組稿成員主頁(yè)鏈接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">12月5日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜落描紅滿(mǎn)嶺楓 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣海漁翁送月沉 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨昏樂(lè)伴李園風(fēng) (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮去鋪黃萬(wàn)里山 (周元鋒)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮海釣翁悵月升 (周元鋒)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮歲期歸桑梓地 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春風(fēng)思渡異鄉(xiāng)溪 (周元鋒)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕返妝新百姓家（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕隴農(nóng)夫引日升（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">煙汀款約鷺鷗盟（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花發(fā)映紅四月天（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">采藥山翁戴月歸（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">茅廬安頓凈澄心（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨過(guò)催紅二月花 (追夢(mèng)人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巡野牧童伴月歸 (追夢(mèng)人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生樂(lè)享子孫情 (追夢(mèng)人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨過(guò)催青兩岸山（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂釣漁翁待月升（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生愿守故園春（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日出映紅九重天（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂餌漁翁擾鶴飛（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生愿近竹梅林（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋至描紅兩岸楓 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渡水漁翁惹鷺飛 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平生愿守李桃園 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨潤(rùn)催紅兩岸花（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">涉水漁翁樂(lè)日升（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">終年吟臥水云間（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暮燃紅萬(wàn)里云 (笑對(duì)人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">賣(mài)碳髯翁盼雪飄 (笑對(duì)人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">少年夢(mèng)浴戌關(guān)風(fēng) (笑對(duì)人生)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鳥(niǎo)囀喚蘇千柳堤（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">靜齋愛(ài)誦漢唐詩(shī)（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戲水游人逐浪飛（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨過(guò)催紅四野花 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渡水艄公笑浪狂 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋深又落故園楓 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨落洗清五嶺云（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浣褂村姑喜水流（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此時(shí)想伴竹梅鄰（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歲暖催紅兩岸花 (</span>A. 正群<span style="font-size:20px;">)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂釣蓑翁嘆簍空 (</span>A. 正群<span style="font-size:20px;">)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生盡付酒詩(shī)間 (</span>A. 正群<span style="font-size:20px;">)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日落涂紅萬(wàn)壑林（老?。?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耘地農(nóng)夫戴月歸（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">臨秋早著木綿裘（老?。?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日起洇紅萬(wàn)樹(shù)花（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣水漁夫待月升（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">早年志在水云天（閑云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕舞穿簾兩岸楊（劉義）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂釣漁翁鉤月沉（劉義）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生重醉菊花籬（劉義）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨落潤(rùn)紅五嶺花（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂釣漁翁載月歸（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生時(shí)畫(huà)竹梅圖（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)暖催新萬(wàn)草芽（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">采藥村姑喚鶴歸（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">閑暇好寫(xiě)舊時(shí)篇（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖催紅兩岸花（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">收網(wǎng)漁翁載日歸（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">安閑好習(xí)圣賢書(shū)（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春耒染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暖至搖鳴五嶺鋤 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">捎信飛鴻駕霧還 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">少年待育棟梁才 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春來(lái)染碧三江水（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨后添紅四面山 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伐山樵子驚云落（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">御艇艄公激浪飛 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遲暮期歸桑梓地（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">優(yōu)游牽戀菊松情 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block">出句簡(jiǎn)析：</p><p class="ql-block">首聯(lián)出句：春來(lái)染碧三江水</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 景物聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 三江：古代各地眾多水道的總稱(chēng)，非實(shí)指。唐杜甫 《有懷臺(tái)州鄭十八司戶(hù)》：“ 天臺(tái)隔三江，風(fēng)浪無(wú)晨暮?！?lt;/p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 春回大地時(shí)，暖意與生機(jī)漫染江河，原本可能清冽或沉寂的多條江河，被新綠浸透，呈現(xiàn)出澄澈碧透的色澤。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句核心是通過(guò)“染”字將春的生命力具象化——既寫(xiě)出春風(fēng)、春雨催生草木綠意，倒映江中致水色變碧的自然之景，又暗含春日主動(dòng)鋪陳生機(jī)的靈動(dòng)意趣，整體基調(diào)清新昂揚(yáng)，滿(mǎn)含對(duì)春日復(fù)蘇的喜悅。</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯(lián)出句：伐山樵子驚云落</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 樵夫在山中砍伐樹(shù)木，斧聲或身影驚動(dòng)了山間縈繞的云霧，使其仿佛緩緩飄落、散去。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句核心以“驚”字串聯(lián)場(chǎng)景——既寫(xiě)出樵子勞作的質(zhì)樸動(dòng)態(tài)，又賦予云霧輕盈靈動(dòng)的質(zhì)感，將山林的清幽與人間煙火相融，畫(huà)面鮮活且?guī)е匀灰耙葜畾狻?lt;/p> <p class="ql-block">三聯(lián)出句：遲暮期歸桑梓地</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：感懷聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> “遲暮”點(diǎn)明人生晚年的時(shí)光節(jié)點(diǎn)；</p><p class="ql-block"> “桑梓”代指故鄉(xiāng)，古時(shí)常在宅旁植桑梓，后成故鄉(xiāng)代稱(chēng)。 </p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 人至晚年，最殷切的心愿便是回到魂?duì)繅?mèng)繞的故鄉(xiāng)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句隱藏著歲月沉淀的鄉(xiāng)愁與歸屬感——“期歸”二字既露對(duì)故鄉(xiāng)的眷戀，又暗含漂泊半生的悵惘，將暮年對(duì)安穩(wěn)故土的向往寫(xiě)得含蓄而厚重，滿(mǎn)是漂泊游子的懷舊情懷。</p> <p class="ql-block">審閱：芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿：燕燕于飛 周元鋒 琢玉 元其 追夢(mèng)人 荷花 雨燕 美西洋 若水 笑對(duì)人生文心 震撼哥 大海 ANG.ZQ 老丁 閑云 劉義 淡定 弦思 云朵 胡蘿卜 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后為序）</p><p class="ql-block">編錄：笛里關(guān)山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 以上簡(jiǎn)析僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限，難免有不妥之處，歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片根據(jù)出句意境由Al創(chuàng)作</p>