<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)，把秋灌醉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">釀釀蹌蹌的葉子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紅著臉跌倒在路邊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">薄衣衫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">裹緊了秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只想</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">留住一絲溫存</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">打濕了葉子和路面</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">葉頰泛著淚光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">路面倒映出夢(mèng)幻的霓虹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凄美而生動(dòng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉生夢(mèng)醒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不過(guò)是對(duì)歲月的服從</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)，可以讓人買(mǎi)醉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">也可使人清醒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">當(dāng)風(fēng)撫動(dòng)白發(fā)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我和葉子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在秋的搖擺中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自由地縱情起舞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">當(dāng)雨濕了眼角</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">葉子和我</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在秋的醉意里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">從容地旋轉(zhuǎn)年輪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025年10月20日 萍子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">附：憩園點(diǎn)評(píng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 萍子的詩(shī)，醉的是秋，醒的是心。它讓我們看到，生命最美的姿態(tài)，或許不是永不凋零，而是在凋零前，依然能醉舞一場(chǎng)。作品意象鮮活，擬人傳神。開(kāi)篇“把秋灌醉”“葉子紅著臉跌倒”，以擬人手法生動(dòng)勾勒出深秋的靈動(dòng)，“葉頰泛著淚光”將雨打落葉的景象與情感共鳴結(jié)合，讓景物自帶溫度，極具畫(huà)面感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">圖片來(lái)自網(wǎng)絡(luò)，致謝！</span></p>