<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">最近，看到網(wǎng)上《我打碎了夕陽》接下文，引起網(wǎng)友們的熱情參與，我的幾位在各地的戰(zhàn)友也頗有興趣，即興抒發(fā)情感，文筆令我贊嘆不已。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">網(wǎng)友們才華橫溢，選擇幾首，在此一并分享。 ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">《我打碎了夕陽》續(xù)寫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 作者/戰(zhàn)友金卓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真想能重回當(dāng)年那段時(shí)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不堪鏡中白發(fā)須眉的暮色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">可惜了多少風(fēng)流倜儻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真舍不下當(dāng)年那段時(shí)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">胸懷一顆太陽般的心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">時(shí)不時(shí)純真地荒唐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真辜負(fù)了當(dāng)年那段時(shí)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再無仰望藍(lán)天白云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仗著單純才會有的幻想</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">真難忘去當(dāng)年那段時(shí)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">后悔在朝霞升起的時(shí)刻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沒敢把那一句話去對她講</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">無非想慰藉當(dāng)年那段時(shí)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">禁不住的夕陽重聚起漫天紅云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心中又是縷縷絢麗的惆悵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —2022.5于哈爾濱</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戰(zhàn)友秀蘭續(xù)寫《我打碎了夕陽》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">德智體勞天天向上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">共產(chǎn)主義青年團(tuán)爭先模樣 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">毛澤東時(shí)代好風(fēng)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">母親辛勞納鞋縫漿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">父親休日打魚全家喜氣洋洋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鄰里高興共品償</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">六五年當(dāng)兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在部隊(duì)度過十八歲生日永生難忘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">無悔軍旅青春年華，一生跟黨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十七七十青絲白發(fā)少華夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">璀璨金光撒向蒼穹，融入心房</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕陽猶如晨光朝氣蓬勃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心花怒放</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鬢霜染霞更美輝煌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">—2022.5于哈爾濱</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戰(zhàn)友春才續(xù)寫《我打碎了夕陽》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 殘片在湖波中蕩然</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 驚了魚兒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 失去了人們欣賞的方向</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 水花鳴起的聲響</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 嚇了白鷺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 飛起雪花喚醒了靜謐的林場</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 乘坐晚霞融入滄桑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 日月狂奔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 銀河系還有多少個(gè)太陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 迎來了人生的鬢霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 驚回首</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 喜浴萬丈霞光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —2022.5于上海</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">戰(zhàn)友劉云續(xù)寫《我打碎了夕陽》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">?我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喝了一碗雞湯。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">心像長了翅膀，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老想外出逛逛。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">怎奈疫情羈絆，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">宅家堅(jiān)守?zé)o恙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">—2022.5于沈陽</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戰(zhàn)友麗芬續(xù)寫《我打碎了夕陽》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天空一片金染的輝煌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渲染了我滿院的花香，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">斗艷爭芳的花兒羞紅了臉龐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我拾起碎光，揉進(jìn)胸膛，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心向遠(yuǎn)方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再美的風(fēng)光也鎖不住我的心，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思念在家鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">? —2022.5于溫哥華</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戰(zhàn)友春元續(xù)寫《我打碎了夕陽》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 遙望殘缺的月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 兩鬢雖染白霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 身體也還硬朗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 想把余熱點(diǎn)亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我重披白衣救死扶傷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">? —2022.5于威海</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 回到齊市延邊東機(jī)場。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 那里不僅有青春的芳華，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 還有俊俏迷人的姑娘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —戰(zhàn)友張春才</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> （延邊東機(jī)場—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 軍校生活留戀的地方）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，重回校園生活的時(shí)光。不合體的軍裝瀟灑，嘹亮軍歌回蕩在耳旁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，畢業(yè)奔赴各自的戰(zhàn)場，多年后的我們相見，歡樂笑聲與當(dāng)年一樣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，我們不再有年輕模樣。風(fēng)雨后的彩虹更靚，友誼花朵盛開在夕陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —青青草于哈爾濱</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戰(zhàn)友艾玲續(xù)寫《我打碎了夕陽》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 《晩霞未央》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 夢回到了青春時(shí)光，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 夕陽卻眷戀我，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 望著天邊一抹玫瑰色的彩霞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我陶醉在其中，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 卻油然而生出淡淡的憂傷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> ??????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 盼望著再重新生活一次，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 或像一條江滋潤蒼生，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 或像一朵蘭素雅幽芳，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 或像一片云九州遨翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> ??????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 卻見證了什么是寬容大度。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 她向著我微笑，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 發(fā)出自信的光芒，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 讓我透徹了紅塵，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 只想告訴她，我愿同她一道，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 盡顯絢麗的晩妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —2022.5于哈爾濱</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 把晚霞披在肩上。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 守望皎潔的月亮，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 虔誠地祈禱上蒼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 讓病毒快些消亡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 聽見校園里歌唱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ——戰(zhàn)友劉云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 散碎的夕陽依然霞光輝煌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 余輝更美，霞光更浪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 晚霞沐浴著薔薇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">? 玫瑰是那么清香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 晚霞讓人心靜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 永遠(yuǎn)被人欣賞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —戰(zhàn)友郭春元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 疫情打碎了時(shí)光，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 人間改變了生活模樣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 少年青年壯年老年，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 生活節(jié)奏幾乎一樣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 晨光夕陽不分清明，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 昨天今天不知時(shí)光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 堅(jiān)持清零大白奔忙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 只為陽光明媚人心歡暢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我盼人間煙火嬉鬧，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 街道人車熙攘繁忙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 學(xué)校讀書朗朗，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 工廠，店鋪繁忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 人間正道陽光，自由飛翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —戰(zhàn)友閆秀蘭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 《我打碎了夕陽》續(xù)寫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —戰(zhàn)友王麗芬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 瀉下一地橙黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 映在水面共波蕩漾，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 浮在山川一路芬芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 萬里沙鷗弄夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我與夕陽捉迷藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 恰似一少年躲在綠樹花傍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 夕陽雖染盡兩鬢白霜，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我卻笑夕陽沒有我心里豁亮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 舉一杯初升的月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 沉醉了這愜意的模樣！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">頓時(shí)像孩子般彷徨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">而它已化作山邊云中的晚霞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">映慰我的胸膛。 ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">讓那顆未泯的童心，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伴著滿天的彩霞，與地久 與天長。(網(wǎng)友)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 癡笑時(shí)光倒流的夢想，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 誰都留戀青春年華，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 披上余暉感覺一樣的美。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ??????</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 我打碎了夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 滿地霞光歲月的滄桑，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 誰都欣賞火紅的夕陽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 青絲白發(fā)一生無悔的美。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> —青青草</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">感謝原創(chuàng)者的奇妙命題，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">給人帶來無限的遐想。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">首首耐人尋味，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">字里行間充滿了人生百味、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">對人生的感嘆和對美好生活的愿望。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">編輯制作 青青草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">圖片來自網(wǎng)絡(luò)感謝原作者</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2022.5.27于哈爾濱</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">后記: 傍晚人們來松花江邊看夕陽，一輪紅日緩緩落下，余暉將天際映得一片輝煌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕陽的紅是那樣的艷，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">就像一團(tuán)火焰在天邊燃燒，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">漸漸火紅變成橘紅，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江面波光粼粼 泛著點(diǎn)點(diǎn)金光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕陽西下是一道獨(dú)特的風(fēng)景，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>美妙而暫短卻是人間最美的夕陽。 </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一場精神盛宴，令人意猶未盡，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人們懷揣著美好，迎接明天的朝陽。</span></p>